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I want to share this images of my work with all of you. What am I doing wrong or what can I improve. Please let me know. All coments wellcome.
http://www.pbase.com/lesliesoto/lsdps&page=2
Leslie
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Leslie,
Mike is right! You need to provide 4 critical sets of facts, besides camera/lens gear, IMHO, if your object is to get the most serious and useful technical feedback.
1. The intent/purpose of the pictures: ie is this some sort of "boudoir photography" for the girl herself, or is this for some commercial job?
For the former, you are stuck with her flaws. There are fat folds and undulations in her thigh in image 07.
(Incidentally, in image 55 for example, she has salmon colored "costco: panties: crude looking, doesn't go with the clothes or the car.)
I don't do fashion or commercial photography, but it seems this is not that.
2. By what shortcomings, if any, do you feel your pictures miss their goal (rejections, criticisms etc or what troubles you about them?
3. What was the lighting? Bad shadows, (except for image 10, which I like and is pretty fine), demonstrate unfortunately fat cheeks.
Depending on the use of the pictures, this may or may not be detrimental. Anyway, I believe, this is a lighting challenge.
3. Finally, did you P.S. image 10, where the shadows are not so obvious?
Some suggestions for careful experimentation. You might look at desaturating the skin a little, playing with the color temp and brightness a tad to make her complexion less ruddy and be kinder to her facial features.
Good luck.
Asher
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